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__//I Made this for The Art Of Threes contest, which is the contest for DA's third birthday. Took me about 3 hours to make, if you cant see what it is, its meant to be a label for one of those really old antique tins / jars, something like that for a bit of humour. I know that everyone will be tryin to impress with our new style of art, so i went backwards quite a few years in time to the antiques and designed this!.. Hope you all enjoy, and hope the judges will be impressed by this too . ok guys cya!
__//Stock photography from Inertia [link] |
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i'd try to give it even more texture, and include the text when doing so. maybe the paint of the text drips just a tiny bit, or a bit of it is missing, scratched off... it looks a bit crisp.
also, you've got some pixelated edges in areas, like the bottom left - you got some stairs going there, and a little bit around the center rings too.
anyway, just some suggestions. i really like what you have, i just think you can keep pushing it.
nice work...
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i still feel like the text could be messed with a little more. the words 'deviantart' and 'birthday' are just too nice looking for this beatup old image. i'd chip away at those letters a bit so they're not so 'perfect' looking. erase little bits from them or discolor them slightly...
but other than that this looks great, loving the texture.
nice work...
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